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Book Review: A Clash of Honor by Morgan Rice

A Clash of Honor (The Sorcerer's Ring, #4)A Clash of Honor by Morgan Rice

My rating: 2 of 5 stars

What can I say…I want to love this series, after all it has all the ingredients and makings of an epic fantasy; magic, swords, kings, dragons and all that sort of stuff that I love. However, it’s likable at best, not great, and not fantastic. This is probably an example of having good ideas but having poor execution. Thor and Gwen, Thor’s Legion Brothers, Erik and so on and so on all have flaws in execution. There is a ton of repetition in this book too, not only in use of the same words, but the same actions (as previously mentioned in a ton of prior reviews) from characters kissing style (OMG! every kiss was “held for a long time”) to Thor’s legion brothers getting into insane situations that have no possible basis in reality of actually coming out in a positive way, to always having the “legion brothers who Thor did not know” in his band getting killed or injured in an outing. Ugh! It’s so frustrating and distracting. The scene where Erik “solo” infiltrates a castle, kills the Lord and all the attackers he encounters, throwing knives, axes, short spears, every shot hitting on mark and perfectly until he rescues his lady love..all great concepts..but no way in hell is it even plausible to think that they way that scene was executed, that Erik stood a chance in succeeding as he ultimately did. Thor and Gwen “Held the kiss for a long time” was how they kissed every time! Thor beaten down, attacked, facing ENTIRE enemy armies (not once, but TWICE), but suddenly manifesting a new power and saving himself and his close special legion friends (while the “add-on legion friends” all perish and die. Then on to having Thor being saved by Gwen whose “aim is true” only after picking up a bow and arrow for only a few minutes since not practicing archery since she was a child. There are just tons of examples of conflict being resolved where things work out perfectly. Yes, there is conflict and resolution, but when it’s predictable, its plainly obvious and when it’s not predictable, it’s plainly implausible. Like when the two legion boys (yes, boys, teens) went up the sides of a canyon and both were perfectly able to move boulders (without any special talents or strength) and cause an avalanche at just the right time to wipe out almost an army of giant-size humanoids, on horse back. It could be comical in a sense, but no, it’s not meant to. Hey who am I to criticize like this? I’ve never written a full length book, let alone an entire series spanning over seventeen volumes (all self-published I believe) but I think this might be the first epic fantasy series that I just don’t care to finish and not because I don’t like it (the story, the basic plot and fantasy aspects), but because it’s down right annoying to read with all the issues mentioned above. Ugh!!!!!

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Book Review: Lord of Chaos by Robert Jordan

Lord of Chaos
Lord of Chaos by Robert Jordan
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

So when I did research on the Wheel of Time I had expected for the story to slow down based off other readers comments. I mentally prepared for the slowdown. But even that is tough to deal with. I really, really love this story as it began in the first few books. I like the character development too, some characters have a lot of depth and the inter-relationships are fascinating. The world building is superb, rich, well described and triggers your imagination. All well and good. Here is where it’s stressing me out.

There is infinite marching. Right from the start in the Two Rivers in book one to even now on book six. Everyone is marching somewhere and it takes bloody long to get there. Blood and bloody ashes. And bloody ashes Light illumine the Lord Dragon the Lord Dragon this and the Lord Dragon that and Nynaeve is tugging on her braid and Mat is marching again or Rand is marching again and Egwene and all of the Aes Sedai are condescending toward men mostly Rand and no one wants to work together and some other army or group is marching form place to place and Nynaeve is tugging on her braid and folding her arms under her breasts and blood and bloody ashes Light illumine the Lord Dragon Nynaeve is tugging her braid and blah blah blah.

What I am showing here is a rather poor attempt and illustrating the slowness and repetition of this part of the series. The story moves along at a snails pace. Jordan, may he rest in piece, keeps repeating sections in the text as if I never read any of the prior books and in some cases as if I never read some of the prior chapters. The tension built between the characters is very slow. It is somewhat effective as of course I still want to read on and read the next chapter and the next book, but some of character, setting and storyline minutiae is too much for my brain to care and in come cases pay attention what I am reading.

So I endure, hoping to find the real meat and potatoes that are in this Wheel of Time stew. Please, tell me it gets better in book 7 or 8. I’ve invested so much time thus far, and I really want to see this one to the end. I am told that struggling through the middle of this series is worth it and I hope that the last few Jordan books get better and I have read that Brandon Sanderson takes the lead post-Jordan’s death and does supreme justice to the body of work and finishes off in a huge way that the fan base cheers him for, I just hope I can make it through the ride.

Well I didn’t really want to come off negative. I really do love the Wheel of Time Series and I absolutely admire and appreciate the work that Robert Jordan put into this and also what Brandon Sanderson did with the finish. I just want to get past the middle, and more to the end without walking in a snail’s shoe.

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Addendum to my review; – A blog reader (atoasttodragons) reminded me of the end of the book so I am updating my review to include my insight on the last chapter…. Thank you atoasttodragons!!

Chapter 55 ( The Last Chapter ) is the major battle scene for the book and in my humble opinion makes up for the “slowness” of the chapters 1-54. The battle between the Tower Aes Sedai, The Shaido, The Asha’man and the Salidar Aes Sedai is epic. Mazrim Taim really save’s Rand’s ass and I can’t wait to see how this character interaction builds in the coming books. I was in awe of the Asha’man. It was very satisfying. It was especially satisfying to see the male wielder’s of the true source kick some Aes Sedai ass. Throughout the entire series, there is a sense of female superiority from the Aes Sedai, to an extreme at some points. It was nice to see some balance come to the equation (Yin/Yang) – not that I think that the male half should dominate or anything, but that there should be more of an equality. Seeing  the nine Aes Sedai from Saldaea swearing fealty and bending the knee to the Dragon Reborn was epic in my opinion!

Overall, from when you stick with this one from start to finish, it was just another masterful installment of adventures in the Wheel of Time by Robert Jordan .

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