My rating: 2 of 5 stars
What can I say…I want to love this series, after all it has all the ingredients and makings of an epic fantasy; magic, swords, kings, dragons and all that sort of stuff that I love. However, it’s likable at best, not great, and not fantastic. This is probably an example of having good ideas but having poor execution. Thor and Gwen, Thor’s Legion Brothers, Erik and so on and so on all have flaws in execution. There is a ton of repetition in this book too, not only in use of the same words, but the same actions (as previously mentioned in a ton of prior reviews) from characters kissing style (OMG! every kiss was “held for a long time”) to Thor’s legion brothers getting into insane situations that have no possible basis in reality of actually coming out in a positive way, to always having the “legion brothers who Thor did not know” in his band getting killed or injured in an outing. Ugh! It’s so frustrating and distracting. The scene where Erik “solo” infiltrates a castle, kills the Lord and all the attackers he encounters, throwing knives, axes, short spears, every shot hitting on mark and perfectly until he rescues his lady love..all great concepts..but no way in hell is it even plausible to think that they way that scene was executed, that Erik stood a chance in succeeding as he ultimately did. Thor and Gwen “Held the kiss for a long time” was how they kissed every time! Thor beaten down, attacked, facing ENTIRE enemy armies (not once, but TWICE), but suddenly manifesting a new power and saving himself and his close special legion friends (while the “add-on legion friends” all perish and die. Then on to having Thor being saved by Gwen whose “aim is true” only after picking up a bow and arrow for only a few minutes since not practicing archery since she was a child. There are just tons of examples of conflict being resolved where things work out perfectly. Yes, there is conflict and resolution, but when it’s predictable, its plainly obvious and when it’s not predictable, it’s plainly implausible. Like when the two legion boys (yes, boys, teens) went up the sides of a canyon and both were perfectly able to move boulders (without any special talents or strength) and cause an avalanche at just the right time to wipe out almost an army of giant-size humanoids, on horse back. It could be comical in a sense, but no, it’s not meant to. Hey who am I to criticize like this? I’ve never written a full length book, let alone an entire series spanning over seventeen volumes (all self-published I believe) but I think this might be the first epic fantasy series that I just don’t care to finish and not because I don’t like it (the story, the basic plot and fantasy aspects), but because it’s down right annoying to read with all the issues mentioned above. Ugh!!!!!